12.17.2014

Short Story Essay Checklist

Proper MLA Format
  • name class teacher date
  • header with page numbering
  • centered title
  • 2x space, 12 point font
  • in-text citations
  • Works Cited page with hanging indents


Intro/Thesis
  • intro discusses story or subject in general terms and flows into thesis
  • subject assertion how shown/why/how


Body Paragraphs
  • introduce idea (I) of paragraph which demonstrates an aspect of the thesis
  • provide relevant details (D) with explanations of their meanings and significance (E)
  • quote critical details (D) that are relevant to the idea being developed
  • finish with analytic conclusion (AC) that directly ties point of paragraph to thesis: use key words
  • effectively use set-up phrases and transitions between and within paragraphs


Quotations
  • mostly integrated quotes
  • direct quotes utilize explanatory set-up phrase with a colon or comma before the sentence long quote
  • provide key words and phrases which help explain
  • do not merely repeat what has already been summarized or paraphrased
  • citations at end of sentence only


Conclusion
  • returns to thesis (not a mere repeat)
  • feels like a resolution to essay
  • consider using resolution of story or other critical moment to illustrate thesis





12.12.2014

Rough Draft for Essay

Sidonie-Gabrielle Colette
Due 12/15-16

SOLID rough draft for an essay with the focus of your choice on either "The Rocking-Horse Winner", "The Lottery" or "The Hand" and "The Story of an Hour".

Focus of grading will be on thesis quality, effective use of AC, and proper quotation flow and format.


I would suggest that "The Hand" and "The Story of an Hour" are the most straight-forward in their message; the other two are more subtle.


12.10.2014

Homework Due 12/11 and 12/12

In an MLA formatted Google Doc, compose a thesis and a body paragraph to a hypothetical essay on either "The Lottery" or "The Rocking-Horse Winner".

Thesis should include subject, assertion, and how shown.

Body paragraph should include ISDE>AC. Be sure AC ties back to thesis.

12.03.2014

11.20.2014

Works Cited

Due to time constraints, you do not need to cite a scholarly source in your essay; however, if you do use any other sources of information, they must be cited.

You do need to have a Works Cited page for your essay, even if the only text you use is our Hamlet text. You do not need to make the Works Cited page on its own page (although that is standard procedure).

Link to sample page is here. My sample is here.

Please submit your essay by sharing via Google Docs and upload on Turn It In.


11.19.2014

Bring a Rough Draft Next Class

Sit down with Hamlet open and read and write fast and furious for an hour. Don't worry about citing or even correct grammar stuff. Just read and write and connect ideas and see where you end up. Turn off your phone; don't check your instagram...just write.

You will be happy you have that hour of work next class.

11.17.2014

Preparing to Write Your Essay

There will be study sessions after school Tuesday, Wednesday, Thursday this week. If you are struggling with this assignment at all, please find time to attend. I can address overall structural issues, quote flow, thesis construction and defense, or anything else that students tend to struggle with.

For your next class, please be sure you have completed the following:

Finished reading Hamlet
Read "Hamlet: A Modern Perspective" by Michael Neill (307-326)
Decided on a prompt or focus issue you will address in your essay
Have ready to use three quotes from the text that directly relate to the essay you will write

The essay attempts to clarify meaning and examine how it is generated.
The text itself is where meaning begins.
Thus, your essay must use the text extensively to make the particular point your essay focuses on. That is, you must close read and quote a whole bunch. Your thesis should arise from the text; your point should be supported by the text; your essay should document through paraphrase and many quotations that the text suggests what you claim it does.

You are going to need a thesis.

Hamlet (present tense verb) ____________ by/through _______________.

Consider:
Shakespeare used Saxo's story of Hamlet's pretended madness and delayed revenge to explore the brutal facts about survival in an authoritarian state. 
This is Neill's thesis for the section of his essay dealing with surveillance.

Paraphrased to fit the format I offer above:
Hamlet explores the tragic consequences of spying through Hamlet's inability to navigate the web of surveillance that dominates Claudius's regime.
This is the sort of statement you should be looking to define as you respond to any of the prompts you pursue an issue of personal interest.

A final offering on an issue we have discussed little:
Hamlet uses humorous, clever wordplay in an attempt to deal with the overwhelming emotions he feels.



11.10.2014

Hamlet Final: Formal Academic Essay

Due Date: Monday, November 24th at 1pm
Submit through Turn It In

Requirements:
MLA format with Works Cited page
12 point Times font, double spaced
Two page minimum
At least one academic source
Extensive use of text
Use or formal thesis

Link to a brief list of academic essays, find your own, or use the one in our text.

Prompts:

The question of why Hamlet does not immediately avenge his father’s death has been a central interpretive mystery of the play for over 400 years. Why does Hamlet procrastinate?

Hamlet’s sanity, his “antic disposition”, and his erratic behavior that often seems very real is another central issue of the play, especially over the last couple of centuries. Does Hamlet in fact go crazy, or is he just playing a part? Or is he just profoundly disturbed, emotionally overwhelmed by circumstance and fate?

Ophelia’s madness, on the other hand, seems quite real. Why does she go mad? And in what ways is her madness different than Hamlet's?

A more modern concern of the play is the deaths of Rosencrantz and Guildenstern. Did they deserve this death? Be sure to include Hamlet’s assessment of his decision to have them executed.

Much is made of honor, conscience, and temperament in Hamlet. Compare and contrast the characters of Hamlet, Laertes, Horatio, and Fortinbras.

Analyze and discuss the position and power of women in Hamlet. In general, how are they treated and viewed, and how do they assert their own identities? Alternatively, outline Hamlet's attitude toward females and their sexuality.

There are three families portrayed in the play: Hamlet's, Ophelia's, and (to a lesser degree) Fortinbras's. Compare and contrast the different roles of elders and children and how the younger generation manages and reacts to their different situations.

How is friendship and romance represented in the tragedy and how do those dynamics influence the plot? What about the resolution?

Focus on Hamlet’s three major soliloquies. What is the progression of Hamlet’s thoughts revealed in these assessments of self and society? How do they reflect the major developments of plot, conflict, and resolution?

Hamlet declares, “Denmark is a prison”. What conditions, both personal and public, make this metaphor a defining point of Hamlet’s world and how do those conditions contribute to the tragedy?

Death, obviously, permeates this play from beginning to end. From the murder of King Hamlet, to the Prince’s famous meditation in the “To be or not to be” soliloquy, from Ophelia’s apparent suicide to “poor Yorick”, from the brutal blood bath that ends the play to the mere addendum that “Rosencrantz and Guildenstern are dead, death is never far from the plot or the characters’ thoughts. Discuss the play’s various attitudes towards death and suggest whether the play reaches a final conclusion regarding the “undiscovered country”?

The Player King comments: “Our wills and fates do so contrary run/That our devices still are overthrown;/Our thoughts are ours, their ends none of our own” (3.2.234-236). This seems to suggest that fate rather than an individual’s own volition is the ultimate determinant of earthly events. Might this thought be viewed as the great theme of this play? Explain.

The ability to speak clearly is essential to how we relate to others and ourselves and in Hamlet this is especially true as a character’s ability to speak is linked with their power and identity. Discuss the play’s attitude towards “Words, words, words” (2.2.210). This seems to fit quite well with the above observation.

Certain types imagery and metaphor (sickliness, e.g.) runs throughout the tragedy. Trace any such use of language and discuss its artistic contribution to the play’s themes.

Select a single quote and explain how it represents a major theme of the play.

You may also create a prompt of your own, but it does require my approval.

Finish Hamlet

Periods 1-3 for Thursday 11/13
Period 5 for Friday 11/14

"the rest is silence"