"You Fit Into Me": A One Paragraph Analysis

You Fit Into Me

Margaret Atwood

you fit into me

like a hook into an eye

a fish hook

an open eye

Margaret Atwood's "You Fit Into Me" portrays the helplessness and pain of feeling trapped in an unhealthy romantic relationship. (I) The poem begins on a positive note (S with a little E). The speaker proclaims her lover a perfect "fit" in the opening line and title, (D) suggesting a relationship that is both emotionally and sexually satisfying (1). (E) She compares this fit to that of a "hook into an eye" (2). (D) This simile suggests their relationship is secure, just as a hook and eye holds clothing securely in place; it is as if they were made for each other, specifically designed to work together, to "fit". (E) However, a far more unpleasant side to their relationship is revealed in the following final stanza. (S) The perfectly suited hook and eye become his "fish hook" in her "open eye" (3-4). (D) This rather startling shift of imagery suggests the speaker's feeling of entrapment and helplessness. (E) It is as if she has taken the bait on his hook and entered a seemingly loving relationship only to discover too late her inability to break free from the bond. (E) The "open eye" (D) makes it clear that she sees the situation; she is in pain and suffers, but has lost control of her autonomy; she is aware that the source of her entrapment is his snare biding her to this unequal relationship, but there seems to be nothing she can do regain her independence. (E) In a larger sense, Atwood's poem might be viewed as paralleling the experience of many women in intimate relationships. A love that once seemed so perfect and promising begins to feel, for whatever reasons, like an overwhelming deception seemingly impossible to break free of. (AC)

Notice: 

The idea sentence merely introduces the basic idea of the poem that will be developed and explored in the paragraph; it does not try to say too much; it is just a beginning.

From there, the situation or setting is quickly established ("the poem begins").

Then, the analysis jumps into the beginning details of poem itself, BUT IT HANDLES THE DETAILS ONE STEP AT A TIME! It does not try to describe the whole poem all at once....baby steps!

For each detail paraphrased or quoted, the analysis attempts to provide as complete and thorough of explanation as possible. (As you get better at writing, you will notice that the ratio of D:E begins to increase in the direction of E.)

A second summary/situation/setting sentence with the transition "however" is used to emphasize the shift in the poem's meaning. Most poems have this sort of shift. A poem's basic structure might be described as a situation established first, and then a sort of shift that leads to a new insight, resolution, or further complication that seems unresolvable or is further commented upon. To put it another way, the poem often says, "This is the situation, this is how it plays out."

D and E return as the second half of the poem is handled. Note that the E begins to dominate as the conclusion and resolution of the poem, and the analysis, is reached.

Finally, an attempt at an AC is made. Analytic conclusions can go two ways. The first is that they return to the idea sentence, and provide a kind of expanded, in-depth version of that idea sentence, summarizing the idea more completely as it has been developed in the analysis. This is generally simpler to manage, but can (sometimes) feel a bit redundant unless a deeper implication is arrived at. The second way attempts to connect the poem to the realities of the world, to suggest how the ideas the poem represents are also representative of real life issues in the real life world. Which AC version does this analysis attempt?

Finally, please note the use of integrated quotes; single words or short phrases are worked into sentences instead of quotes of whole lines or multiple lines tacked on to phrases like: "The poem says in the first line..."

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Writing is a battle, especially this sort of high level analysis. Stick with it and understand the different types of sentences that are used and what their function is in the analysis. No matter where you are right now, you will get better.